Monday, 13 October 2008
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"marissa"
her body was delectable,
like a half price sale i couldn't resist.
with four on the floor i crawled to her,
begging for some company.she said it would cost me,
but i didn't care -
being lonely has a higher price.
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Comments (5)
This piece gives me the strange imagery of a bank. I like it. :)
@CrazyKey123 - thanks! :)
thanks :]
and what you said was true
i guess i just didn't see it in his point of view.
:)
Nice poetry. Thanks for the feedback!
@pedrothepoet - thanks, and no problem! :)