Monday, 13 October 2008
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coffee was a taste i acquired so quickly,
your words were dense - populated so thickly.
they filled my mind and spilled across the table,
those deep blue eyes made me unstable.
for all those nights spent side by side,
replaced by tears i tried to hide.
we drifted apart but i still remember,
those long cold days spent in december.
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wow that's good ! did you write that yr selff !? and yeahh i love degrassi they are startingg the new seasonn ! ((:
@xxogorgeous - thanks! and yeah, i did :) oh that's good! i'll for sure watch it now. i hate watching shows mid-season, because then i don't know what happened
@whitecloves - duuuuude same here, like i end up wanting to watch it then i forget teh primere and then i forget about it then i remeber it but then i fdon't want to watch it because i don't get waht's goingg on. and the new season of it just started like friday i htink ?
so waht's up withh yaa right now ?!
i really like your last three poems. very succint and yet so graphic, like words spilling across a table. nice.
@xxogorgeous - i'll have to check online then to make sure the premiere is on friday haha.
@a_postmodern_nobody - thanks a bunch :)
Hey, thanks so much for the comment the other day. It means a lot that people actually show interest.
You're poems are amazing. You should get them published in a magazine or something ! :)
@perfectshadeof - no problem!
and thanks! i've actually been thinking about it but i never thought i was good enough haha :)
@whitecloves - They are. You should do it! You already have one fan :)